Can You Hear Me?

It's me again, admin from Aurumart-seed, dohohoho.

Man it looks like there's some intense symbolism here. Composition wise, there's not really much I think I can point out! I've already mentioned the grid-line issue on your last drawing, so there's no need to whip out that again, and it's really much less noticeable here anyway so I'm not so bothered with it.

The only thing I can think of here that seems oddly...off, to me, is the fact that while the drawing seems really symmetrical throughout, it seems a little bit lop-sided up at the top. Having the the rest of the drawing as equal as it is on both sides, it seems odd that you decided to have three eyes on the left side and the one on the right. I mean they're certainly cool, and it's really not a huge issue when you're drawing psychedelic artwork like this, but it was just something that I noticed, so I figured it was worth mentioning.

I definitely flowed with this one well. I started at the top and drew my eyes naturally downwards, which is what I think you were trying for. So that's cool. Also, I bet drawing the mouth portion in the center was a pain in the butt to do, all those tiny letters, haha, but it's also my favorite part of this drawing. I could see how the drawing as a whole looked like a face as well, which was something I picked up early on and thought was pretty cool.


Overall this is a good piece, really crazy and trippy, and I can see how much time you must have put into all those details, which is something I respect.


So once again, thanks for being a part of our critique-day event, and we hope for your continued participation in future events as well!